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Old 01-02-2005, 08:35:04   #8
Lazarus and the Gimp
Howling at the moon
 
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Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: The radioactive Somerset coast
“So, here I am” Celia said to herself as she stepped off the train. “I did it. I can’t believe I did it! I actually told my mother a convincing lie and I’m now about to spend the weekend with the most gorgeous man I know…well, ish. Just because I haven’t met him in the flesh, doesn’t mean we don’t know each other.”

Too much back-story in too short a piece of internal dialogue.
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