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Asher
07-02-2006, 20:32:32
I just wrote the poem to end all poems!

Forever drawn to be a doll
In so much as delivery cranks
Trucks bathe in the minute
Alive with a delicate shout

Chat an umbrella under the windmill
Deliver his crown to the desert
Whatever it is, be it the light
The slow trot or the nightingale

Slowly, he looks pasty forever
The shadow grows with his vortex
Grown into the lamp but clever
The fork silhouette is yellow

Boom, the mud clears the grass
Aroused into groggy greetings
All of the ovens cool their roasts
And then, gorillas live the noose!

Japher
07-02-2006, 20:35:40
It's crap
It doesn't rhyme

though I like the reference to a gorilla!

devilmunchkin
07-02-2006, 20:37:46
...i don't understand it.

MattHiggs
07-02-2006, 20:38:52
Looks like a load of random words put together by some kind of poem generator.

Frozen Frog
07-02-2006, 21:22:06
Originally posted by MattHiggs
Looks like a load of random words put together by some kind of poem generator.

=Asher

Gary
07-02-2006, 21:57:02
Yep, I think that one's ended poetry for good.

Lazarus and the Gimp
07-02-2006, 22:07:56
I love the notion of a "delicate shout".

Drekkus
07-02-2006, 22:41:49
Die endlösung der poetenfrage.

Lazarus and the Gimp
07-02-2006, 22:44:03
You dirty bitch.

Drekkus
07-02-2006, 23:09:25
I just showered :(

Asher
08-02-2006, 00:39:45
Originally posted by MattHiggs
Looks like a load of random words put together by some kind of poem generator.
I wrote it in 5 minutes in my social psychology class.

It's more of a mind dump of freeflow consciousness. I am an artist-e.

MOBIUS
08-02-2006, 01:00:42
Aren't you supposed to be good at poetry, being gay and all that...

self biased
08-02-2006, 01:32:11
own goal.

Asher
08-02-2006, 01:52:06
My poetry is on a whole new level. It will be centuries before Britons are capable of comprehending its beauty and significance.

Greg W
08-02-2006, 02:10:16
Originally posted by Asher
It's more of a ... dump ...Got that part right at least.